I’m supposed to to write 10-15 sentences about the feeling of preparing and drinking hot chocolate on a cold winters day. It’s an adjective assignment. Please tell me if I should edit, add, or remove anything
My legs felt heavy from exhaustion as I walked toward the loud whistling – almost irritating – sound of the kettle. Every step is a challenge, it’s as though if I make one mistake, the heavy weight will make me fall over. As I approach the sharp, now painful noise, I quickly reached for the outlet and pulled the plug that created the annoying sound. With relief, I grab the kettle and pour the boiling water into the prepared mug. The steam escaped almost immediately, and I watched it create vague images in the air that only I can see. I look down and see the hot water blend together with powder to create a warm, brown, sweetly scented treat. I reach to grab the mug, focused only on the chocolaty goodness that lies in it. I grab the mug without hesitation, and took my first sip. A sudden feel of a hot pain ran across the surface of my tongue, but other sensations soon followed. I tasted a great pleasure of a creamy, rich treat that was sweet in the right way. The marshmallows just added to the creamy taste, and they melted away more quickly than I can devour the drink. I slowly put down the empty mug after a short while of finishing it, and I stood there for a moment. I looked outside, and I saw the wind gently carry small snowflakes to other locations. I looked at the fireplace in my house, and saw the warm colours of the flames warm the air around it. And in that moment, I have never felt so content.
I really NEED to get rid of them !(yeah i put that in capitals , im brave) i have tons of them and they really bother me 
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